6+ Panes & Count the Fish Tails!

Today, 2G dived into another “graphic” story and… saw Ibuki’s mum (or dad) patiently waiting with 4 clearly identifiable fish in her (or his) beak!

STORY STRUCTURE

In our digital age, we all see and hear a vast number of stories. One might conclude, reasonably perhaps, that telling stories is easy, a piece of cake, a walk in the park.

Not so.

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Serious writers — professional writers — work hard learning how to tell stories well. A Robert McKee seminar is not cheap! Story structure is key.

2G has been learning a structure based on the Hero/ine’s Cycle:

  • We meet our main character in an identifiable setting

  • We see our character on a normal day

  • Then… something BIG changes everything! (And the story starts)

  • Off our protagonist goes on a journey, overcoming challenges

  • And our story ends, perhaps with treasure, or a feast, or a grand celebration!

On our first story-structure outing we had such fun — and learned so much — that a repeat performance was in the cards from the first few minutes!



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As before, 2G dived into their storytelling, consulted their homework notes, shared ideas with classmates, added (or subtracted) from their original stories and generally — hee hee hee — discussed story structure.

  • “Who’s your character?”

  • “What happened?!? Wow.”

  • “Yeah, my guy/gal had a big fight too!”

This time, instead of at least 4 panes, students were required to produce at least 6 panes!

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During our Story Structure #1 outing, we noticed students who had completed their stories enjoyed helping others “finish up.”

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This afternoon, when it came time to finishing up (after P.E.), the Order of the Day was, “No one can begin Free Time / Imaginative Play until everyone has finished all 6 story panes."

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Not only did 2G students enjoy helping one another finish up, but they thoroughly enjoyed learning about the stories their classmates were telling.

Lots and lots of story-structure talk!

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In 2G we… don’t permit acres of white space in drawings. (Boring!) Students are asked to develop background or, failing that, to shade the background.

  • “I can’t think of anything to put in the background.”

  • “Well, where does your story take place?”

  • “Hun?”

  • “What’s the setting?”

  • “Oh, in a forest full of hungry beasts and demons.”

  • “So, perhaps, put some trees in the background? Maybe a beast or two peering out from behind the trees, ready to pounce?”

  • “Oh, yeah…”

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Another remarkable day of story structure and 2G story telling!

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Bravo!

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COUNT THE FISH TAILS!

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We count… 4 fish tails!

And… no juvenile white tern — a.k.a. Ibuki — in sight!